Icarus's blog: "Augurs, Martyrs, and Agnostics"

Consider this a call to arms- I'm in the process of printing off the short stories I've written over the last few months and presenting them to friends and family

I have some hurdles to overcome in my writing, and I'd like some feedback. I need to know if I'm saying what I want to say, if my audience wants to keep reading, and if I can turn a profit from my idea.

So

I'm calling upon some of you to offer earnest, legitimate feedback and proofreads of the story as it progresses. You don't have to like it, you don't have to find redeeming qualities in it- you don't have to validate my entire life and identity as a writer with candy coated words and compliment sandwiches.

Just proofread the thing, and offer some fundamental academics on the issue

then maybe we can talk about our feelings.

Nothing more than

feelings.